<p>Essays have always been the death of me; I've always had trouble with them, but I don't want my essays to count against me when I submit my college applications.</p>
<p>Anyway, all three of my my essays are still pretty much rought right now.
Would anyone please review&edit my essay(s)? Please be as brutal as possible! </p>
<p>Here are the prompts for my three essays:
1. We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations and accomplished your academic successes. Please describe the factors and challenges that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How have these factors caused you to grow?</p>
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<li><p>Describe an experience that you have had or a concept you have learned about that intellectually excites you. When answering this question, you may want to consider some of the following questions: Why does this topic excite you? How does it impact the way you or others experience the world? What questions do you continue to ponder about it? </p></li>
<li><p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. </p></li>
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<p>Please choose any one you'd like to review! (And it'd be great if you could review all three!)</p>