Would anyone read my Cornell Engineering Supplement Essay?

<p>If anyone would be willing to read over my cornell supplement essay that'd be great. it seems a little short to me, and I'm planning on possibly adding some more at the end. Also I haven't edited it too much yet, so I apologize for grammar mistakes ahead of time.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you read mine once I’m done with it.</p>

<p>Sure. I’m not applying to cornell</p>