Would anyone read my essay please!

<p>Hi!</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone wouldn't mind reading my common app essay and giving me some feedback on it. I would really appreciate it!!</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>I'll do it..</p>

<p>I'll do it. 09 but unfortunately none of the schools I'm applying to are common app.</p>

<p>Sure, send it over!!</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>