Would appreciate it if some of you helped to look over my UC personal statement....

College Essays
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<p>It's still very "rough," I kinda just wrote things that came to mind. It's also about a hundred words longer than I want it to be... </p>

<p>Thank you very much!!!</p>

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<p>sure, I can read/edit</p>

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<p>sure, send it to me</p>

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<p>i can try to give you some feedback. PM me</p>