Would appreciate it if someone could critique my "Why Duke?" supplement

Colleges and Universities A-Z Duke University
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<p>I'll PM it to anyone who assents</p>

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<p>I can help</p>

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<p>I can help</p>

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<p>I can help :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>sure .</p>

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<p>i got in ed i can help</p>

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<p>I am not applying to Duke. But my sister just got in ED! PM me and I can help!</p>

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<p>If you still haven’t submitted, I can take a look!</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>

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Can anybody read mine? I will read yours too. PM me