Well, Kirk’s change to the program for the Kobayashi Maru test was cheating, so perhaps not the best analogy to draw upon for a college application essay.
I think @jym626 nailed it – overcoming an obstacle is an essay, not a hook.
Unfortunately it may also be something of a cliche or hackneyed essay – there are a lot of kids with diagnosed LD’s, many of whom receive accommodations – this article gives a good sense of the numbers: http://www.northjersey.com/story/news/education/2017/01/26/record-numbers-students-seeking-accommodations/96162464/
I understand the impulse. My son is dyslexic but became a straight A student in high school and a NM Finalist, and eschewed accommodations-- (so no 504 plan, no extra time on exams). So I was quite proud as a parent and also thought “overcoming dyslexia” would have been a great essay topic.
But I’m glad my son had the insight to realize that there were much better (and more memorable) essay topics he could choose. I think after a parent has weathered years of struggle and anxiety through early school years, the student’s success seems remarkable and certainly worthy of special recognition.
But the college has a different perspective – they want to be able to assess the student’s current strengths, what the student will bring to the campus, what the student will do and become, what the student will contribute. If the essay isn’t showing that, then it is not helping with admissions.
Sometimes it is absolutely necessary to include an essay somewhere to shed light on issues that could otherwise hurt the applicant – for example, a record of poor grades followed by improved grades might need to be explained; or if a student did not take expected coursework such as a foreign language because of waivers given based on an LD. In those situations the ad com needs to know the “why” part, although it is often better if the guidance counselor rather than the student explains.
I think that in some circumstances, “overcoming my disability” could make a good essay topic, but I think it is probably best reserved for students who have achieved something particularly impressive in light of the disability, who did something that showed a unique level of initiative or resilience, or whose dyslexia became the motivating factor for another achievement (such as an award-winning science project or involvement in community service related to literacy).
That is, something more than a diagnosis and a 504 plan, because the whole point of the 504 plan is to level the playing field – so the student who does well in school once the plan is in place is doing exactly what is expected at that point.