Would greatly appreciate a read-over of my supplement essay

<p>Hi CC! I'm applying to Brown and would be eternally grateful if someone could give me some constructive criticism on my "Why Brown?" supplement. PM me if you would be able to. Thank you so much!</p>

<p>Hi! I’m in the same situation as @adalayde. Help would be really apprieciated. If you could rpoofread the essay, PM me :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>