Would love a reader for a Duke short essay

Parents Forum
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<p>Hey Parents, </p>

<p>I have written by "Why do you want to go to Duke?" short essay, and was hoping somebody would be willing to read it over? I think it is different than the normal response, but I would love to get some feedback on the content as well as make sure there are no blatant punctuation errors. </p>

<p>It is only 2 paragraphs, and I could pm it to you if anybody would be so kind?</p>

<p>Thanks! :)</p>

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<p>I am a Duke mom. I'll read it.</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>I'm a Duke jr, I'll read it :) (I might take a couple of days to get back to you, though)</p>