Would love a reader for Why Duke essay

College Essays
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<p>Hey,</p>

<p>I have written by "Why do you want to go to Duke?" short essay, and was hoping somebody would be willing to read it over? I think it is different than the normal response, but I would love to get some feedback on the content as well as make sure there are no blatant punctuation errors. </p>

<p>It is only 2 paragraphs, and I could pm it to you if anybody would be so kind, especially someone already in college, or graduated?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>PM me, I will give you comments</p>

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<p>I'll critique it. :) I'm not in college, but I'm not applying to Duke, and I'm pretty good at English.</p>

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<p>I'll help too.</p>

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<p>I'd like to help, I'll give my honest advices</p>

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<p>PM me, i could be of help</p>

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<p>I can read yours, will you also read my common app essay?</p>

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<p>i read it too. pm me</p>

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<p>i will read it, hopefully proofread 4 u</p>