Would someone be willing to read my college essay? I would be forever grateful.

<p>I'm applying ED to 5 schools very soon, and before I send out applications, I was wondering if someone would please read and review my college essay. I'm really self conscious about it, and I would totally appreciate any kind of feedback on the topic, word use, on grammar/spelling, anything really. Anyone's help would be truly invaluable to me. </p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>