Would someone critique my essay please?

Transfer Students
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<p>Sorry for posting this in the wrong forum, but I got no responses in the college essay section so I thought I'd try here.</p>

<p>I'm transfering from a 4 yr state school to a more to my dream school (hopefully). I'd prefer not to name either school</p>

<p>Background:
I did terrible in highschool and on the SAT, I have one semester complete and a second one thats almost over. By the end of it all Ill have completed 33.5 credits.</p>

<p>Thank you</p>

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<p>lotta views, no replys, anyone?</p>

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<p>yes ... i will provide some critique for u Heal...</p>

<p>thanks for providing on mine.</p>

<p>pm it to me..</p>

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<p>pm to me 10 char</p>

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<p>i wud luv to read ur essay ; pm to me</p>

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<p>pm me i can help :)</p>