would someone critique my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>if someone would read my essay i'd so greatly appreciate it. it's for the commapp.</p>

<p>pm me!</p>

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<p>send it PM!!!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look</p>

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<p>i'll help critique</p>

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<p>sure.. pm me</p>

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<p>sure private message me and ill definitely give it a run through. Over my 3 years as a college student and transfer student I have been accepted to MIT, Cornell, Wash U, Carnegie Mellon, Northwestern, US Naval Academy and others. I'd be happy to revise your essays. Jus tprivate message them to me.</p>

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<p>If you'd like an adult perspective, I would be happy to read it. Let me know when it is due, please.</p>