Would someone critique my essay?

<p>Could I PM someone my essay for some feedback? I'm really worried it comes off as too superior/"high horse"-y, which doesn't reflect my personality. Thanks!</p>

<p>I will be happy to review it for you. </p>

<p>Thank you so, so much! I will send it :)</p>

<p>I’ll take a look </p>

<p>I’ll can take a look too! </p>

<p>sure, willing to help, PM me</p>