Would someone like to critique my UC Essay? (Prompt #2)

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>If you guys could leave your emails I can send my prompt to let you critique. Please and thank you for your time. :D</p>

<p>I will :slight_smile: laurelarroyo @ yahoo . com</p>