Would someone mind reading my common app essay?

<p>'Most Influential Person'</p>

<p>I am using it for my long essay on the common app (I am sending out to Cornell tomorrow) as well as my personal statement to Tulane.</p>

<p>I would really appreciate if someone read it over for me. Don't worry, its short and sweet. Its about 600 words, barely a page single spaced. To be honest I am a little bit worried about the length. </p>

<p>I would be more than happy to PM it to you :)
I would rather not any class of '09ers, but if you insist.</p>