<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>I've tried to condense my activities into a 2-page document. Would anybody mind reading over it? I really want to get an outside opinion as to whether I strike a good balance between giving enough but not too much description. If so, please PM me with your email address and I'll send it to you. I'd really appreciate any help! :) </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>