Would you mind reading/rating my essay?

College Essays
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<p>EDIT: So uh yeah, I just now read the sticky on who to PM my essays to...Guess its not a good idea to post this on here in public. </p>

<p>So anyway, this essay is for UNC Chapel Hill
Topic: Why do you do what you do?</p>

<p>It would be of immense help if someone would read it and rate/critique it. Thanks a lot</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to take a look at it for you.</p>

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<p>Ill read it :slight_smile: PM me!</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I could do that :)</p>