<p>I rewrote my personal statement and I think it is way better now. However, I really need someone to read and edit my essay. Please give me some good feeback/critiques for my essay! Explain what I need to do to improve my personal statement. Check for spelling, grammar, and structure. Tell me if you want to edit my essay and I'll PM it you! Also, I will be happy to do an essay exchange or if you just want me to edit your essay. Thanks!</p>
<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>ok I'll pm it to you</p>
<p>I would love to check it out, just pm me.</p>
<p>Sounds interesting!</p>
<p>I'll check it out and critique. :D</p>
<p>I would love to read your essay.
People tell me what I provide excellent and honest commentary.
Send it to me: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>i'd love to read it.
pm me</p>
<p>sure..id like to read your essay....pm me or send it to my email</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it- pm me.</p>
<p>i’ll read your essay =)
but could you take a look at mine as well?
pm it to me.</p>
<p>p.s. twilight is love. haha</p>
<p>PM me. I’ll look at grammar but I’m generally more concerned with content/style.</p>