I used this template (coolforcats started it for MIT) and I’m just adding my version here if it’s helpful.
Decision: Accepted EA1, $23k/yr Presidential Scholarship
Objective:
NEW SAT I (breakdown M/CrW): 740/710 (1450)
SAT II (subject, score): Physics (710), Math II (740)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.819 at time of submission
Weighted GPA: idk probs at least a 4 but debatable
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): top 30% i think
AP (score): Physics 1 (4), Physics C (Mech:4, E&M:5), Calc AB (5), Seminar (4)
Senior Year Course Load: AP Literature, Financial Literacy, Guitar, AP Calc BC, AP Research, Engineering Design and Development, Physics 234 (dual enrollment with my state’s technical institute)
Number of other EA applicants in your school: 10
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): n/a
Common Awards (AP Scholar, honor roll, NM things, etc.): AP Scholar with Distinction, four year honor roll, National Honor Society member
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (name, grade levels, leadership, description):
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Peer Mentor 10-12 (run Freshman Orientation, volunteer throughout the year at school events, assist guidance counselors co-teaching a freshman course, given multiple presentations to the freshman classes, plan the annual Cultural Night by creating posters/programs/managing ticket sales, annual leadership training, trained in peer mediation)
Peer Leader with Sources of Strength 9-12 (a suicide prevention organization, raise funds for charities and educate my peers on the importance of suicide prevention)
Dance PreK3-12 (competitve training in ballet, tap, jazz, etc.)
Music Performance/Chorus 9-12 (participation in multiple school wide music events as as soloist, group member, and chorister)
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Job/Work Experience:
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front-end retail at a local business
private tutor
intern at a university (student affairs, performing arts tech)
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Volunteer/Community Service:
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Girl Scout (community service projects, lasting impacts on my community, Bronze/Silver/Anticipated Gold Award)
Venture Scout (camping and teambuilding exercises, Administrative Vice President for the 2015-2016 year, handle recruitment and head meetings)
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Writing (Subject, 1-10 rating, details):
CommonApp Essay: 7, wrote about how I don’t like labels
Why WPI Supplement: 10, picked specific details
Recommendations (teacher’s subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Teacher Recommendation #1 (AP Physics C, Physics Club): 10/10, he writes amazing recs, I was one of seven total girls to take APC, one of four girls to take Phys234, one of very few 4yr physics students to tutor at his club
Teacher Recommendation #2 (English I Honors, III Honors): 7-9/10, he’s seen my academic growth but again I don’t have the best relationship so it could go either way
Counselor Rec: 8/10, he’s a bit boring but he’s seen my growth as a student and as a person which I think helps
Additional Rec: n/a
Interview: cancelled last minute
Other:
Date Submitted App: 11/1
U.S. State/Territory or Country: New Jersey
School Type: Highly competitive magnet
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Income Bracket Range: 100k+
Hooks (URM, first generation, recruited athlete, development): female in physics, dancer (if that even matters)
Reflection
Strengths: four years of physics (5 semesters, AP and college level), okay GPA, lots of commitment to service and volunteering, being a girl in physics
Weaknesses: less-than-optimal standardized test scores, most likely sub-par writing
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: my scores are on the higher end of their median, plus I demonstrated interest which they consider
What would you have done differently?: work harder on my SATs (?)
Where else did you apply?: MIT (EA deferred), Brown, Columbia, RPI, Stevens (maybe), Lehigh (maybe)
General Comments & Advice: make sure you know why you would go there, make them know why you want WPI over anywhere else.