<p>Any parent or writer who wants to read my essay, just comment. All im getting nowadays is "good job, i love it, awesome". And people are giving me mechanical fixes. So im looking for some real critiques. Im on my sixth draft so obviously it is supposed to be (at least i hope) well written. Hoping for my essay to push me into elite schools, so any help is appreciated :)</p>
<p>ill help pm me</p>
<p>I’ll try to help. PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll try too just pm it</p>
<p>Bump!
Sorry guys, im not looking for prospective students to read it. I need either parents or college students</p>
<p>Come on CC’ers! U know u wanna read a college essay!</p>
<p>i’ll try to help.</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>
<p>I’m a high school senior, but I have extensive outside writing experience, and I’ll be a very harsh critic if you need that :o Want to PM me the essay?</p>
<p>I’ll give it a try as well!</p>
<p>i’ll read it!</p>