Writing a fictional story for common app essay?

<p>Is that a bad idea? Be honest. I know I've posted a billion threads on my essay but i think I finalized the "topic of my choic" being what era would I lke to live in and why? In order to reveal my personality for example if I picked the 80s I would describe the fashion and go into my love of ffashion for one of the reasons. In writing this essay, can I take a fictional presny tense approach . As in me speaking as if I am really in the time machine and really there, or is it advised to avoid that?</p>

<p>Please reply and be honest. All opinions, advice, and contructive critisicm are welcomed</p>

<p>bump! 10 char thanks</p>

<p>btw i am also bluexox123</p>

<p>bump 10 char</p>

<p>In all honesty, it depends. Is this for a supplemental essay, or just your personal statement? This can go right, or it can go wrong. If your going to write a fictional essay you have to make sure it’s clear that it’s a fictional essay and it’s not real. You also have to make sure that this essay has some connection to your life. Do you want t be a creative writer? There has to be a reason you took this direction with your essay.</p>

<p>Below is an example of a great college essay that is clearly fictional. I don’t know who wrote it, but it’s a great example. Also, if you need someone to read your essay to make sure it’s going in the right path, feel free to drop me a PM.</p>

<p>3A. ESSAY: IN ORDER FOR THE ADMISSIONS STAFF OF OUR COLLEGE TO GET TO KNOW YOU, THE APPLICANT, BETTER, WE ASK THAT YOU ANSWER THE FOLLOWING QUESTION: ARE THERE ANY SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCES YOU HAVE HAD, OR ACCOMPLISHMENTS YOU HAVE REALIZED, THAT HAVE HELPED TO DEFINE YOU AS A PERSON?</p>

<p>I am a dynamic figure, often seen scaling walls and crushing ice. I have been known to remodel train stations on my lunch breaks, making them more efficient in the area of heat retention. I translate ethnic slurs for Cuban refugees, I write award-winning operas, I manage time efficiently. Occasionally, I tread water for three days in a row.</p>

<p>I woo women with my sensuous and godlike trombone playing, I can pilot bicycles up severe inclines with unflagging speed, and I cook Thirty-Minute Brownies in twenty minutes. I am an expert in stucco, a veteran in love, and an outlaw in Peru.</p>

<p>Using only a hoe and a large glass of water, I once single-handedly defended a small village in the Amazon Basin from a horde of ferocious army ants. I play bluegrass cello, I was scouted by the Mets, I am the subject of numerous documentaries. When I’m bored, I build large suspension bridges in my yard. I enjoy urban hang gliding. On Wednesdays, after school, I repair electrical appliances free of charge.</p>

<p>I am an abstract artist, a concrete analyst, and a ruthless bookie. Critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear.</p>

<p>I don’t perspire. I am a private citizen, yet I receive fan mail. I have been caller number nine and have won the weekend passes. Last summer I toured New Jersey with a traveling centrifugal-force demonstration. I bat .400. My deft floral arrangements have earned me fame in international botany circles. Children trust me.</p>

<p>I can hurl tennis rackets at small moving objects with deadly accuracy.</p>

<p>I once read Paradise Lost, Moby Dick, and David Copperfield in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. I know the exact location of every food item in the supermarket. I have performed several covert operations for the CIA. I sleep once a week; when I do sleep, I sleep in a chair. While on vacation in Canada, I successfully negotiated with a group of terrorists who had seized a small bakery. The laws of physics do not apply to me. Years ago I discovered the meaning of life but forgot to write it down.</p>

<p>I have made extraordinary four course meals using only a mouli and a toaster oven. I breed prizewinning clams. I have won bullfights in San Juan, cliff-diving competitions in Sri Lanka, and spelling bees at the Kremlin. I have played Hamlet, I have performed open-heart surgery, and I have spoken with Elvis.</p>

<p>But I have not yet gone to college.</p>

<p>no, its for common app.
i want to write about a decade that best fits me for topic of your choice.
so i would write it as if i am going to that place.
like saying i stepping into a time machine… obviously i didnt really do it, because they arent real lol</p>

<p>is that too weird for just plain ol common app</p>

<p>I think something like that can work. In fact, I’ve seen quite a few supplement essays that ask students about what they would do in the future. Just make sure it’s obvious to the reader why this is the time period in which you want to live.</p>

<p>What does your love about the eighties say about you as a student?</p>

<p>not really anything…but i thought it would reveal my personality</p>

<p>good point.</p>