Writing: Error ID Questions

<li><p>Although the advertised price of a car may seem reasonable, the addition of dealer preparation fees, required options, taxes, and delivery charges may make the actual cost less attractive to a prospective buyer. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>White it may appear that stewardesses are concerned soley to provide passengers’ comfort, they are in fact extensively schooled in flight safety. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>Students who wish to become a doctor must begin to plan their studies long before they apply to medical school. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>Neither of America’s major political parties are interested in making the trade balance an important issue in the upcoming elections. No Error </p></li>
<li><p>Although his term was much shorter than that of most presidents, Abraham Lincoln insituted the income tax, the draft, and the Thanksgiving holiday. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>The recently lowered interest rates allowed my wife and me to buy a larger home for our family. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>The panelists on the bioethics committee found the proposed research, though controversial, to be consistent to both the law and the standards to which they had all previously agreed. No Error</p></li>
<li><p>The Sonic 1, the Blue Flame, the Thrust SSC - each of these cars became the fastest in the world at the time they were raced. No Error</p></li>
</ol>

<p>What are your answers to these questions?</p>

<ol>
<li>E</li>
<li>B</li>
<li>A</li>
<li>A</li>
<li>C</li>
<li>E</li>
<li>B</li>
<li>D</li>
</ol>

<p>averageazn: what is your rationale for #2, 5, 7, 8?</p>

<p>I got most of them correct. I choose some answers because it seemed right, but not because I knew why.</p>

<p>Explanations would be nice. Thanks.</p>

<ol>
<li>idiomatic way would be "concerned with"</li>
<li>the terms of other presidents is plural, therefore, "than those" should be used</li>
<li>should be "consistent with"</li>
<li>"each" car is the subject, therefore, it would be wrong to use "they" later on</li>
</ol>

<p>ok i have a question now

[quote]
8. "each" car is the subject, therefore, it would be wrong to use "they" later on

[/quote]

so if 'they' is wrong because 'each' is there ..and 'each' is underlined..then why not just pick 'each' as wrong?</p>

<p>I made a mistake. Each is not underlined. It's "of these cars" that is underlined. Sorry!</p>

<p>Well, I think that even with the underline you would have to pick "they were" as the error since all cannot be the "fastest."</p>

<p>
[quote]
Well, I think that even with the underline you would have to pick "they were" as the error since all cannot be the "fastest."

[/quote]

actually wait..then that means that you should pick The first one Because even after taking out 'they' it still makes no sense beacuse "Each of these ....Fastest" doesnt go togther., so the answer would be A ..because the sentecne could easily be fixed that way (Example:"Were 3 Race Cars that became the fastest in the word")</p>

<p>or is it just me?</p>

<p>Well, with the "each" it would imply that they had all become fastest cars but at different times. Having "the Sonic 1, the Blue Flame, the Thrust SSC" were 3 race cars would make them fastest cars concurrently, which is impossible.</p>

<p>why would 1 by B? it should be "additionS of" not addition of because its mentioning a lot of things right? i'm confused...</p>

<p>also another question, why is 4 A? Neither of America's major political parties are interested in making . So it should be Neither of America's major political parties IS interested in making? Why is it singular? isn't parties plural?</p>

<p>Isn't #8 no error?</p>

<p>I don't see anything logically or grammatically wrong with it. The sentence does not imply that all 3 cars were the fastest at the same time...but only at the time they were each raced.</p>

<p>^^ 8 is D.</p>

<p>you can't sat (each of them) and then say (they). singular and plural don't go together.</p>

<p>nice, averageazn.</p>

<p>yeah, nice job</p>

<p>This is really mind-blowing. Averageazn, you did, in fact, get all the correct answers. I know because I recognize these questions as ones that I wrote last winter or fall. I'm pretty sure they were on a practice test, but can't remember which, since I've written hundreds. ChrisC, you must be taking a Princeton Review course. Which test are these on? I must get myself a post-production copy to see if the layout worked out nicely.</p>

<p>I signed up for a practice PR test at a local high school. They let me keep the question booklet and took my answers to mail to the scanning site. Anyway...I never got my score back for some reason. What I did during the test is circle any question that I answered, but wasn't at least 80% sure it was correct. I just posted a few of the writing questions that I circled.</p>

<p>It's test #2242 version 1.0.</p>