Writing Question (Not in Blue Book)

<p>Caps is the underlined part...</p>

<p>UNCERTAIN HOW TO PROCEED WITH THE SCENE, THE ACTORS STOPPED, AWAITING FOR further instructions from the director.</p>

<p>Two of the closest answer choices I could get...</p>

<p>A. Correct as written.
B. Because, they were uncertain how to proceed with the scene, the actors stopped and awaited</p>

<p>The answer is B. Why?</p>

<p>On a sidenote, what tools do you think I should use to increase my score on this section. I can write a good essay but I want to boost my grammar. Greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>For these questions, just flip it.
what makes sense?</p>

<p>The actors stopped, awaiting for further instructions from the director, uncertain how to proceed with the scene.
or
The actors stopped and awaited because they were uncertain how to proceed with the scene.</p>

<p>See how B would be a better choice?</p>

<p>Alternate explanation.</p>

<p>As commonly used as it is, await for is an incorrect usage of await.
Await already means wait for.
AWAITING FOR further instructions is wrong.
AWAITED further instructions is correct.</p>

<p>As a matter of fact, there is an acronym AFI which stands for Awaiting Further Instructions</p>

<p>thanks gcf, i think this is the usage they were looking for here.</p>