Writing questions from the sat BB ?

[Mshmsha]

<p>From practice test two:</p>

<p>18- As the mayor [was evaluating] the proposed tax, he was less interested in the revenue it [would generate] than in whether [they] would [disproportionately] affect certain income groups.No error.</p>

<p>21- Members of the Alvin Ailey Dance Company [have] once again [shown how] the combination of strength and [being agile] [can produce] beautiful movements.No error</p>

[spellweaver04]

<ol>
<li><p>“they” is wrong because it’s plural. That pronoun should be “it” because it refers to the singular noun “tax”.</p></li>
<li><p>“being agile” is wrong because it’s not parallel with strength (noun). It should be agility instead.</p></li>
</ol>

<p>Hope this helps.</p>

[Mshmsha]

<p>Thanks, you really helped :) Have a nice day :)</p>