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<li><p>Bill Simultaneously listened to music and did homework at the same time because he believed that the music enabled him to relax while he studied.</p></li>
<li><p>Even when Barbara Jordan put questions toward a political nominee, her elegant diction evoked in listeners memories of her eloquent political speeches.</p></li>
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<li>“simultaneously” and “at the same time” mean the same thing, so “at the same time” is redundant and should be omitted.</li>
<li>“put … toward” should be “put … to.” You put questions to a person. “put” in this context means to propose. You propose something to someone else (for consideration).</li>
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