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<li>New Zealand [had fostered A] a thriving local music secne [for decades B],but it was nit until the late 1980s [when C] New Zealand musicians began to [to reach D] international audiences.
2.the [figures cited A] in the the report do not [collaborate B] the author's claim that small hospitals [generally provide C] better patient care [than do D] big ones.
please help me with these questions</li>
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<p>1)c</p>
<p>it must be ‘that’ not ‘when’
it was not until…that…</p>
<p>2)B </p>
<p>wrong diction</p>
<p>should be ‘corroborate’ not ‘collaborate’
collaborate means cooperate, which doesn’t make sense in the sentence
corroborate means to prove by evidence</p>
<p>Thank you amy!</p>