(Writing) Sentence-improving question

<p>I don't have the answer to the following question, so could someone tell me which answer is correct and why?</p>

<p>In the 1980s, the median price of a house more than doubled, generally outdistancing the rate of inflation.</p>

<p>A) generally outdistancing the rate of inflation
B) generally this outdistanced the rate of inflation
C) and the result was the general outdistancing of inflation
D) the general rate of inflation was thus outdistanced
E) thus generally inflation had been out distanced</p>

<p>Maybe the answer is really obvious and I'm just being really slow, but I can't figure out which one is correct -.-</p>

<p>The answer is a. </p>

<p>Here’s my reasoning:</p>

<p>b) “this” makes the sentence awkward.
c) passive voice
d) awkward; same as E
e) awkward; same as D</p>

<p>I agree with IceQube but my reasons are more grammatical than IceQube’s:</p>

<p>A. Answer</p>

<p>Choices B, D, and E, all make the given sentence a run on. These choices cannot be added to the end of the sentence just by a comma. It needs either a comma and a conjunction or a semicolon. Or the plain old period with the capitalization of the letter immediately after. Because these choices make the given sentence grammatically incorrect, you can cross these three out immediately.</p>

<p>C. Option C changes the meaning of the rate of inflation, thus changing the essence of the sentence. The use and placement of the root word general is the problem. Option C is saying that the general rate of inflation was outdistanced. That is not what the given sentence is saying. The given sentence is that the medium prices generally outdistanced the rate of inflation. These are two different things so you cross Option C out. </p>

<p>With writing sections, look for the error in the given sentence. With this, you can easily find the correct answer. However, if you cannot find the error in the given sentence, search for the errors in the given choices and you can cross them out one by one leaving you with just one correct answer left.</p>

<p>^Wow you are great Josh! Can you please give me some grammatical explanations for the writing problems here? </p>

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<p>I need to know the answers first to make sure I got it correct. The first one is really hard.
Is:

  1. A
  2. D
    Multiple underlined problems:
  3. A
  4. D
  5. D
    ???</p>

<p>^

  1. B</p>

<h2>2) D</h2>

<h2>3) I guess you skipped this math problem.</h2>

<p>4) A
5) D
6) A</p>

<p>Wait something’s not right:

  1. (The question about Wendy) A?
  2. (The question about Virgil) is A?</p>

<p>Oops typo: I mean

  1. (The question about Wendy) is B?</p>

<p>For #1 on your post, I think I may have an explanation:</p>

<p>Take an easier sentence, for example:
“There is evidence suggesting that…” <— “Choice B”
“There is evidence that the name Wendy” <— “Choice A”
“There is evidence that suggests” <— A “correct” form of Choice A</p>

<p>As you can probably tell, “evidence that the name” doesn’t make much sense after you looked it over carefully enough.</p>

<p>Choice D and E are not viable because they imply that there was speculation in the past, but that changes the sentence. At least that’s what I think…</p>

<p>Are you saying it was A or B? Because I thought it was A… :$</p>

<p>Yea I meant that B was correct</p>

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<p>Wendy is A - correct as is. The one about Virgil is D.</p>

<p>Really?? Wow nevermind then! Lol I thought I was onto something haha… </p>

<p>No idea tbh lol</p>

<p>OK that makes much more sense. </p>

<p>Going down the numbers and choices:</p>

<ol>
<li>“There is speculation that the name “Wendy” was the invention of JM Barrie, who created a character by that name for his famous play Peter Pan.”
A. Answer</li>
</ol>

<p>B. Verb phrase placement makes the sentence gramatically incorrect. There is speculation saying infers that speculation said something. This is not true because speculation cannot do anything. So this is crossed off. If you see a verb linked to a noun that cannot do what the verb is conveying, it’s usually wrong.</p>

<p>C. This is a case of Pronoun Ambiguity. Who is they? We have no idea, and because we have no idea, we can quickly cross that off the list.</p>

<p>D. Choice D makes the sentence a fragment so it cannot be true. Quick cross off.</p>

<p>E. “Some” is placed in a place where it changes the essence of the meaning. Like what I told the first person who created this thread, if a choice changes the essence of the meaning, it is almost always wrong. There is a difference between saying “There is speculation” and “there is SOME speculation,” which is basically what D is saying. </p>

<ol>
<li>“We had never seen anything like this style of architecture before, we thought we were looking at giant sculptures, not buildings.”
A. We had never seen makes the sentence a runon. Therefore, it is incorrect. Quick cross off.</li>
</ol>

<p>B. Once again, runon. Another quick cross off.</p>

<p>C. Never had we seen is just plain awkward. </p>

<p>D. Answer</p>

<p>E. Never seeing is incorrect. We know that the sentence necessitates a present perfect because the action is still going on. Think of have as being still affected by it. When they saw the giant structures, they were still affected by the fact they had never before seen anything like this. Does this make sense? Just to quickly synthesize: first clause is still affecting the reader even though it encompasses the past so it has to have the present perfect have.</p>

<ol>
<li><p>A great gray owl flying low across a forest clearing, its wings beating quietly and its ultrasensitive ears tuned to the faint sounds made by small creatures concealed under leaves. No error
-There is something wrong with the verb because right now, this sentence is a fragment albeit a very loong fragment. Everything else is fine.</p></li>
<li><p>Determined to make a name for herself as a writer of short stories, Helen never submits anything to an editor until revising it several times. No error
-Until revising is ambiguous. Who was to revise the short stories? Helen or the editor? This is a case of an ambiguous something [forgot the name haha] because you don’t know to whom the action is playing out or being played out to. </p></li>
<li><p>The Roman poet Virgil is highly esteemed today for his epic poem, The Aeneid, yet on his deathbed he himself sought to prevent its publication on the grounds of not being sufficiently polished. No error
-Same as above. Who or what wasn’t sufficiently polished? Virgil or the poem? Once again, it is ambiguous so it is D.</p></li>
</ol>

<p>Does this make sense?</p>

<p>^^ It does make sense! thanks.</p>

<p>But this question is waaaaaay too “grammatical” Choice B, in my eyes, is just as good, but I see where you’re coming from</p>

<p>I’m assuming you’re talking about the Wendy question? </p>

<p>If so, then be prepared haha. There will be quite a few of those in the CR sections of SAT. Some would be not as subtle while others would be as difficult as this question.</p>