Writing Version II

<p>Does anyone remember the ID where the sentence said something about a book being adapted into a play? What was the error in that?
Also, in the first part does anyone remember the sentence where it talked about Rita?
In <strong><em>&</em></strong><strong><em>, Rita _</em></strong>_______.</p>

<p>Last question on the 10 minute section.</p>

<p>Was it B? “,their wings flapping”</p>

<p>I thought it was the one with the semi-colon but then I realized it was used incorrectly?</p>

<p>it was B. Do you remember the questions I posted?</p>

<p>can’t remember the question I definitely put the answer with participial phrase with a comma “flapping”</p>

<p>The birds did something, their wings flapping as they did something.
The other answers had semicolons or “flapped.”</p>

<p>nobody remembers the adapt problem? then i guess it wasn’t no error?</p>

<p>The adapt one was no error</p>

<p>what about the “draw on” one?</p>

<p>I put no error, I’m fairly sure draw on is grammatically correct</p>

<p>hm, wat about the one about Rita?</p>

<p>Don’t remember that, sorry…
What was the question?</p>

<p>does anyone remember what the banjo sentence was exactly?</p>