Writting the best essay ever

College Essays
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<p>needs a loooot of efforts..</p>

<p>Ok, i used a hook to bring you here</p>

<p>Im an intl applicant struggling with my essays. In fact I just finished one several minutes ago and want some honest feedbacks.</p>

<p>Is there anyone who wants to read it? </p>

<p>ps. I don't think 09ers or class of 2013 should read it because you guys are busy preparing for your essays and I am altruistic enough not to waste your time..</p>

<p>be strict. be honest.
I know you will.</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

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<p>i can do a really comprehensive, analytical edit of your essay. pm me. :)</p>

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<p>Claysoul:thank you !!</p>

<p>anyone else wants to help me in my first essay?</p>

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<p>I could ^.^</p>

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<p>thanks all above</p>

<p>anyone else wants to help me?</p>

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<p>Send me the essay via PM and I'll be sure to give you my thoughts/suggestions.</p>