wrong section BUT - is anyone willing to read my essay?

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<p>I am torn between 2 essays I have written for the common app.</p>

<p>One is 500 words and is for the question about diversity. The other is about 560 and could work for either topic of your choice or influential person.</p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to read them and tell me which they think is better?</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>Anyone? I don’t need grammatical/advice on the essay itself, just which one is better.</p>

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<p>I can if you get it to me. My D is a laxgirl, too.</p>