<p>For my common app, I wrote the first draft of an essay of why I want to be a teacher. I know the grammar probably isn't perfect because i wrote it in a short time, but I am looking for feedback on my thoughts, ideas, and structure. If anyone has a few minutes to read it, I can PM it to you. Thanks!</p>
<p>PM it over, and I’ll see what I can do.
The boilerplate disclaimer:
And as a note, in case you were wondering my credentials (or lack thereof), I’m currently a freshman at Johns Hopkins University. Other schools I was accepted to were University of Chicago and Cornell. In other words, I’m far from the best reader, but I’ll do my best.</p>
<p>Send it over :)</p>
<p>ill be glad to read it. just send it over</p>