wrote two different short answer essays for common app

College Essays
1

<p>Could anyone take a look at both of them and give me feedback?
I don't know which of the two I should send in.</p>

2

<p>Yes! Pm me</p>

3

<p>finally someone replies!
sent…</p>

4

<p>I’ll read them too! PM me.</p>

5

<p>pm me please</p>

6

<p>sent… 10char</p>

7

<p>I’d be happy to give feedback. pm me</p>