Wrote Two Short Answer Essays-Which is better?

College Essays
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<p>So I wrote two essays for the Common app "elaborate one EC" topic. (150 words) I'm having trouble deciding which one is better. Could you please read my two essays and tell me which one you like better and why. If your interested to read them please PM me. And this is only for users with at least 100 posts. If it matters, I'm applying to Northeastern, Notre Dame, UMich, and UVA(OOS) via the Common App.</p>

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<p>I can help you decide if you want. I’m not applying to any of your colleges, but it doesn’t really matter 'cause common app essays are universal (well almost).</p>

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<p>PM me. I can help you choose one. I’m not applying to any of those colleges so don’t worry.</p>

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<p>Anyone else, please?</p>

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<p>I’ll read them</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>I don’t have 100 posts but I have a lot of experience with essays. I am not a student. I will edit for content (picking one) and grammar.</p>