Yale SCEA Essays

College Essays
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<p>I've having some trouble cutting these down to size (I think I have too much of an attachment to them). Would anyone be willing to critique either of them? Both my Common App essay and Yale supplement could use it. Be harsh; I can take it.</p>

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<p>Hey, I'll try to help. PM me - but just so you know, I'm applying SCEA too - so its fine if you don't want me to critique your essays.</p>

3

<p>Adult, college parent will read & critique your essays if you PM it/them to me.</p>

4

<p>Send it over!!</p>

5

<p>Bump. 10char</p>

6

<p>i'll read, definitely not applying to yale
if you like, I'll be hard on you too</p>

7

<p>Yep I'll read your essay. Have a lot of free time.</p>

8

<p>I can take a look at it. Not applying to Yale. Shoot a PM at me if you think I could help!</p>

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<p>I just finished my CommonApp essay. This one is a bit of a rougher draft, and I could really use some comments on it (particularly grammar). </p>

<p>P.S. - I'd be happy to read your essays, as well.</p>

10

<p>Panic is setting in!</p>

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<p>you can pm me</p>

12

<p>One last bump.</p>

13

<p>i sent in my stanford app today, ill take a look at the essays if youd like</p>

14

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>