<p>Would anyone like to give my Yale Supplement essay a read? I'm not sure whether I really like it or not and would like to get some other opinions. </p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
<p>ill read it if you’ll read mine!</p>
<p>I just finished with mine…so i can analyse it.</p>
<p>I just finished mine for Cornell, let’s see if yours is better :)</p>
<p>I would love to read it, but you have to know that I am also applying to Yale</p>
<p>yes, sure
i am also applying</p>
<p>i’ll read it! though i am applying too.</p>
<p>I would read it and will be happy to get you feedback. I am currently in grad school.</p>
<p>i’ll take a look if you want</p>
<p>If you want me to read it, please PM me.</p>
<p>I will read, PM plz.</p>
<p>would love to read it, pm me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it and comment back</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you’d like. And you can read mine if you want, too.</p>
<p>I will … PM me</p>
<p>it’s so hard to come up with a topic =\ on the one hand there are so many things about me that aren’t on my application but how do you pick one thing to write about? what’d you guys pick?</p>
<p>[Essays</a>, Admission Information, Undergraduate Admission, U.Va.](<a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html]Essays”>http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html)</p>
<p>Remember, it’s not the topic but the writer that needs to stand out. Good luck all</p>
<p>i’ll read it as a break from my cornell essay</p>
<p>I found that hard too … lik I jst couldnt get soo deep and personal on my essay about disfunctional childhoods and my fathers death etc … that I jst ended up writing bout shopping!!!
lol I think it went well tho and it doesnt end up where u think it wld.</p>
<p>So i guess instead of trying to convey EVERYTHING, jst focus on something small??</p>
<p>Sure I’ll read it. I already submitted my app for SCEA</p>