**Decision: Deferred **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1560 (770R, 790M)
SAT II: Math II - 800, Physics - 800
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School does not rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): Computer Science (5), World History (5), Physics 1 (5), Chemistry (5), Calculus AB (5), United States History (5), Statistics (5), Physics C: Mechanics (5), Physics C: Electricity and Magnetism (5), English Language and Composition (5), Calculus BC (5)
Senior Year Course Load: Software Engineering, AP Micro/Macro Economics, Multivariable Calculus, Photography, Film Production, AP English Literature, AP Psychology, AP Biology
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Some top school/regional awards (school ones are pretty competitive, especially top science student), but I never participated in any academic competitions
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): (from Common App)
Community Service (Volunteer)
11, 12
(District Webmaster), Florida District of Key Club
Implement tech resources for all 27,000 Key Club members in FL & Cayman Islands: redesigned website, created blog & forum, implemented team management
Computer/Technology
11, 12
(Software Developer), Keymmunity Hub
Coded custom intranet for reporting/event management for large organizations (self-taught); currently in use by Florida District of Key Club
Career Oriented
(Founder), Code Coachers
Company to provide personalized comp. sci education; selected Young Entrepreneurs Academy National Semifinalist; funded at investor panel
Computer/Technology
9, 10, 11, 12
(Founder/President), Computer Science Club
Host courses in software development, programming basics, and algorithms; participate in local universities’ comp. sci events
Computer/Technology
9, 10, 11, 12
(Team Leader), Competitive Programming Team
Train competitive programming team for competitions at UF, UCF, Lockheed Martin, & Stetson
Computer/Technology
10
(Team Head), App Development Team
Created official school app w/ dynamic schedules, school news, & lunch menu; planned teacher recruitment app; taught app development
Job/Work Experience: (from Common App)
10, 11
Freelance Full-stack Web Developer
Developed websites/tools for companies (Firestore Online/Sunshine Elec. Recycling/AllIn1Inspections), including e-commerce & inventory (self-taught)
10, 11, 12
(Manager), TNT Fireworks
Manage family-run fireworks tent during holidays; helped pioneer new inventory, sales, & management methods; increased profit by 170%
11
Boutique PC Builder
Built custom PCs; largest PC built cost $10,000 and included custom hard-tube watercooling (self-taught)
Volunteer/Community service: Tutoring, service projects, Key Club - 823 logged hours
Summer Activities: Occasional work, software development, extracurriculars
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App (9):
I felt that my common app essay really explained who I was and why I did what I did. I had a few people read it and got positive feedback so I’m hoping it was decent.
Why Yale? (7):
I wrote this essay pretty straightforwardly, just explaining what Yale specifically had that made me want to go. I didn’t have names of professors or courses, but I did have specific research.
Why do these areas of study appeal to you? (7):
A quick explanation of why I think computer science is an incredibly helpful tool for modern society and the impact it can make. Again, nothing special.
Short questions (6):
Not much to say about these, just a quick sentence each.
Think about an idea or topic that has been intellectually exciting for you. Why are you drawn to it? (8):
I really liked this prompt, and wrote an (I hope) interesting exploration of what makes physics so interesting.
Reflect on your engagement with a community to which you belong. How do you feel you have contributed to this community? (5):
A mostly standard extracurricular essay. I wasn’t a huge fan of the end result but it did the job.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: English (8) - I had very positive feedback from this teacher and was at the top of the class, but I only had him for one year and he gets recommendation requests from 50% of every class.
Teacher Rec #2: Physics (9) - I had this teacher for 2 years, and had a pretty personal connection with her. I would eat with her during lunch discussing physics, tutored her students after school, and explored some research projects.
Counselor Rec: (8) - I’m not very close with him, but I have had a few meeting and he usually has very positive feedback for me about my college chances.
Interview: (7) I feel I connected with the interviewer, and he was interested in what I was doing. Nothing stood out to me as a negative moment here.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Computer Science/Physics/Business
State (if domestic applicant): N/A
Country (if international applicant): U.S.
School Type: Private (w/ financial aid)
Ethnicity: Hispanic
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: <50k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, Questbridge, etc.): Hispanic
Reflection
Strengths: Tons of classes/APs (I took extra classes after school), solid extracurriculars including a very difficult state position, top test scores, a (hopefully) strong Common App essay
Weaknesses: No academic competitions (I despise competitions, but in hindsight, it may have been good to do them anyway since my awards are really lacking), am hispanic but don’t speak Spanish, nothing beyond the state level, even though I do a lot of things they are nearly all concentrated on technology
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: It could very well be that not having awards or being on the national/international level is a dealbreaker. I had the opportunity to have an international position in my main extracurricular, but I felt that I could do more at the state level. Ah well, such is the penalty for not playing the game. I’m still glad I didn’t force myself to do competitions and apply for positions I didn’t feel was best because it would look better.
I may have also not been well rounded enough. I’m interested in a wide variety of subjects (including humanities), but my resume is essentially technology because that’s where I’m more experienced.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: No other decisions yet
General Comments: I honestly don’t know what you have to do to get accepted. I know admissions officers say to do whatever you want and not try to play the game, but if your interests don’t happen to fall in the mold the Common App is designed for (ex. no competitions, focusing very heavily on a single high-effort extracurricular) I feel like it really does hold back what you can show and hurt your chances. If you were accepted, good luck on your journey. If you were deferred, welcome aboard :).