<p>So the long short of my questions is that I raised me and my brother on my own at 14, got my GED right away and enlisted in the army.</p>
<pre><code> When I was discharged (honorable) I came home and got a job working my way to managing a market of retail stores. When the economy collapsed and I realized that I wasn't going to reach my potential until I returned to school, I found a new passion in life. I returned to a local college and here I am two years later wondering If I could get admitted to the school I been dreaming about since I was just a kid.
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<p>I'm one semester away from my AA and I've worked hard since I started. Never took elective classes (only classes I thought I could actually use like managerial accounting or chemistry etc.) and currently have a GPA of 3.81 (Should be 3.86 by the time I graduate, I only have two decently hard classes and two LIT classes that will be an easy A)</p>
<p>My extra-curricular are:</p>
<p>Phi Theta Kappa
College honor society, weekly meetings and national conventions. I volunteer to help new members transition on campus and into our organization.<br>
SA (Budget) Student Chair
-- A school's budget committee consisting of half administrators and half students. Our college's class fee's are distributed to student clubs and we distribute 2 million dollars a year. Voting and club creation as well as adjustment to existing budgets.</p>
<p>Model UN -Assistant Director
Invited (and accepted) to be an assistant director for 2011 Model U.N. Conference In Atlanta, GA. for World Health Organization Committee. I attended this year and won an award for outstanding delegate (3 of 94 in our group got this)</p>
<p>Student Chair - SFTF
Student chair for the Smoke-Free Task Force. Our college is transitioning into a smoke-free campus and I designed the enforcement policy for the campus.</p>
<p>Student Government - President
Current S.G.A. President (previously vice president). Created a popular class that rewards students for outstanding community service. </p>
<p>I Also work full time (still in retail) am engaged (to a brilliant lady who is also applying but had a 4.31 in high school with 4 AP classes, and a 4.0 in college).</p>
<p>I volunteered over 1000 hours before I was 17, and was in the paper a few times, I also taught MH students as a teacher's student assistant voluntarily for two years when I was in 8th/9th grade.</p>
<p>Obviously I want to know how I look as a candidate given the good and bad listed above. I've taken a lot of business and science classes too as I am working toward a dual-masters MPH/Law from John Hopkins.</p>
<p>Any advise would be great.</p>
<p>lastly, I am a horrible writer, in my essay I prepared I talked alot about growing up and how it defined me, as well as how focused I am given what I've gone through to change the health care system in America. I know its probably only a personal grip but It always feels whiny to talk about my childhood, and things I've overcome. Should I focus more on my future plans in my essay?'</p>
<p>Thanks a bunch!</p>