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College Essays
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<p>So my first common app essay was not very well acclaimed when I showed it to people on here the first time, so I reworked it, omitting the extremely pessimistic parts and changing the topic slightly.
Anyone care to read?
Warning: Contents may be hot, just took it off the grill. ;)</p>

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<p>sure ill read it…</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll read it and give back some comments! :D</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll give u comments as well, PM it over</p>

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<p>Pm me please</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll try</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give u feedback</p>

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<p>PM me…</p>

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<p>pm it over and i’ll give you some feedback :)</p>

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<p>PM me, i’ll give you feedback!</p>

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<p>pm me please! I’ll try to give feedback.</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it <em>^_^</em> Sounds interesting</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>send it here</p>

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<p>I’d love to read yours.</p>

<p>Yours seems to be the inspiration I need.</p>

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<p>I will read it and edit. PM me</p>