<p>yup another essay critque seeking thread! I've got a short essay just written for uva..I think it's quite crappy tho..
the deadline is on Jan 3 yet I've still got another essay to write, feaking out right now! anyways, please give me comments and proofread it!!! THANKS!</p>
<p>erm...no one's willing to help?</p>
<p>PM me (10 char.)</p>
<p>anymore please?</p>
<p>yea pm me... im avoiding my hw...</p>
<p>meeeeeeee.
Use my email.
I edit for content, not grammar, tho.</p>