<p>Hi, yes it's another essay. So can anyone please critique my Common App short essay?
I'd really appreciate that. :)</p>
<p>I will read.</p>
<p>If you want to swap common app essays we can? I am better at critiquing than writing IMO. :P</p>
<p>But I am a rising senior so if you are not comfortable w/ that I totally understand & also I do want a critique in return.</p>
<p>I can read it if you don’t mind. I’m Penn ED. If that doesn’t matter to you, send it over and I’ll critique.</p>
<p>I’d love to have a read as well.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want. PM it over.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. Would you mind critiquing my common app personal statement as well?</p>
<p>Hi, alright I only sent it to a few of you since some of you look a little suspicious. Sorry. Also, if you try to steal it, you’re only hurting yourself too. Cheating has mutual consequences.</p>