Yet Another Read My Essay Thread

Applying to Cornell ED for a CS major. I’ve worked on my essays for a long time now and really want the impression and reaction of a complete stranger to solidify my confidence in it. I just want the immediate gist, rating that you would give and reaction you would have from a quick reading - no different than what admissions officers do. As every other thread of this nature has suggested, I’d prefer to share it only with senior members with strong post histories to protect against plagiarism.