Yet another stanford essay

<p>Hey guys, I wrote a first draft, and desperately need some input and suggestions to make it better. Please state in the thread that you would like to read it, and I will PM you the essay. </p>

<p>Stanford is due the 15th, so I need help ASAP!!!</p>

<p>Thanks so much for your time!</p>

<p>Sure, pm me</p>

<p>i can read it</p>

<p>i will read it.</p>

<p>i'll read it too</p>

<p>i'll give my input</p>

<p>I can read it too if you want.</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>sure ill read it</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>i'll read it if you want</p>

<p>i can read it</p>