<p>can someone help me edit/critique my personal statement? the topic is, write an essay, so we can get to know you better.
thanks y'all. i appeciate the time the effort and the consideration that you are? going to put into this edit.
thanks upfront. upfront and personal. get it? cuz its like a personal statement. aight
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