Your assistance requested (transfer essay review request)

Parents Corner
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<p>Hey all,
I'm currently at WM, and applying to transfer to Harvard, and have written my essay, and would appreciate a second look . . . I know the parents' forum to be an amazing place for insights, and if a little of that can find it's way into my paper, well, I'd be pleased to say the least.</p>

<p>If you'd be willing to take a look at the essay, please tell me here or private message me, and I'll either PM or email the essay to you (whichever you prefer).</p>

<p>Thanks for reading this and at least considering my request.</p>

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<p>I'm not a parent, but I'd be glad to read your essay, if you'd like. (Since no one replied yet I figured I'd bump up the thread)</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

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<p>Wow, you have Shakespeare reading your essay!</p>

<p>But you can PM it to me too, if you want. (and is WillyShakes, the old Willywonka)?
:)</p>

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<p>You may PM me if you like. Good luck. I transferred myself back in the middle ages (to Wellesley).</p>

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<p>I"m grateful that you all would take some of your own time to help me . . . thank you. I've PM-ed you all.</p>

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<p>'tis true; the Bard has been resurrected to help you mere mortals with college application essays...alas!</p>

<p>Sike just kidding :p And no, I was never WillyWonka.</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it too if you don't mind.</p>