ZOMG Read this REVISED Essay!!!

College Essays
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<p>Post if you want to read my revised Common Ap essay. Posters will under go a thourough background test. Fakies beware</p>

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<p>I would like a gander.</p>

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<p>BTW I'm applying to Georgetown, JHU, Duke, Penn, Cornell, UMD, Pitt, UChicago, Bucknell, and Dartmouth</p>

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<p>Bump? Anyone?</p>

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<p>Ah, I see you're applying to UChicago. I'll look. I applied there last year. Got in, but I'm headed to Swarthmore instead.</p>

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<p>I will read it my good sir...or mam...or whatever you may be. :)</p>

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<p>Sure. I'm just a bit concerned of what will be unearthed with this 'background' check. But, come what may...</p>

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<p>Last Bump...</p>

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<p>i'll read if you pm me and give you my first impression. im in high school, i dont know how much i can help, but yeah. (and i wont steal, as i highly doubt that your personal experiences would reveal something interesting about me to colleges)(not applying to any of those schools, anyway)</p>

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<p>My essay writing ability is better than yours. I don't feel compelled to copy your material, especially since I'm already in college.</p>

<p>Send your essay to me if you can handle being humbled.
<a href="mailto:apexeffect@gmail.com">apexeffect@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Hi! I don't mind giving it a read; am applying this year too. I'm an international, so I guess my essay will be significantly different from yours! You can drop me an email at <a href="mailto:kunaalw@gmail.com">kunaalw@gmail.com</a>
2013ers for 2013ers! :)</p>

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<p>I don't mind - I'm international too and I'm not applying to the same schools as you - from Boston for me lol PM if you'd like me to read it or if you don't mind, I could show it to my friend Neha who got in Penn and JHU</p>

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<p>PMs and Emails have been sent.</p>

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<p>if you still want more opinions, I'm willing. PLUS I'm going to be a freshman at ONE of those schools you listed. SO</p>

<p>aren't a good candidate to read?? hehe</p>

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<p>lol yes the more opinions the merrier (I am).</p>

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<p>can i read it?
pm me.</p>

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<p>Probably. Its in english and if you can write english i assume you can read english :D</p>

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<p>Like Captain Planet, I have taken all of your morale crushing criticisms and with our powers combined have transformed them in a blinding display of lights to produce a yet futher revised (revisen?) draft. Old readers are welcome. New readers are welcome. Middle-aged readers are forbidden (jk...but really..).</p>

<p>Also this is the only thread that starts with a "Z" lets keep it alive...for future generations to admire :)</p>

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<p>can u pm it to me?i cant critique or anything,i just wanna see how others' essays are,so i have a knowledge of what app essays should look like.</p>

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<p>Sure I'll look at it since you seem to be so excited about it :)</p>