2 UC Essays- please help!

College Essays
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<p>I want to turn the whole application in before Nov. 28. Can someone read them over before then? I would really appreciate it.</p>

<p>Some background on me (if you want to talk to me about my chances)- </p>

<p>-top ten percent of class (57 out of 703), 3.83 GPA
-somehow qualified for ELC program
-IB kid (will most likely get IB diploma), with lots of AP's and Honor's
-lots of volunteering hours, mostly as volunteer tutor
-not too involved in sports, but is involved in a bit of club leadership
-Commended Scholar
-National Biology Olympiad Semifinalist
-Asian kid
-Nanowrimo and Script Frenzy= most of my spare time in the months in which they take place; I'm a crazy writer girl all year round, though
-is applying to UCSD, UCB, UCLA, UCI, UC Davis</p>

<p>Thank you so much!!!!!!!! <3</p>

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<p>Sure. PM it over.</p>

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<p>sure, i’ll help. pm it to me</p>

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<p>itsmylife99- I tried to PM you, but the system tells me that your PM box is full and you need to clear it out. Thanks so much for the offer, though! I can’t believe there are so many nice people who are willing to help out a stranger. </p>

<p>john2- Thank you! I’ve sent you my two personal statements. If possible, please enjoy. I tried to show as much of my personality as possible.</p>

<p>HYPSter- That sounds convenient, but probably not this time. I’m pretty confident in my essays, and I’m quite happy with them. They’re both my third drafts, after all. I just want someone to look over them without bias.</p>