Accepted: Hotchkiss, St.Paul’s, lawrenceville, andover, nmh, Cushing, brooks, Williston, Kent, tabor
Rejected: none
Wait listed: Exeter, Choate, St.Marks
Likely Attending: Andover unless Exeter takes me off the waitlist
Stats:
• SSAT/ISEE/TOEFL/PSAT: 99% overall but 97 verbal 93 quantitative 97 reading
• GPA Unweighted/Weighted: I’m not sure but my grades in 8th grade w/ ESL were A/A+ And 9th w/o ESL were A-/A
• Rank: school does not rank
• Other stats: toefl 115
Subjective:
• Interviews: I feel like I am a strong interviewer; I tried to express my passion for learning regardless of my proficiency in the subject. I tried to show myself not only as an applicant but also as a person - for instance, I am a very crappy athelete as I never had the chance to play sports as a girl in public Korean middle school, but after I came to junior boarding school(will not specify), I tried various sports including soccer, hockey, and softball despite my not being good at it. My team was supportive and I was encouraged to step out of my comfort zone. I think just revealing your strength does not do much as many, many applicants who apply to these competitive schools excel in one thing or another. Eagerly show your weaknesses and also your efforts in how to overcome them. I also talked about my passion in biology, art, and music, and I joked about how I don’t have any study hall through out my weekly academic cycle.
• Essays: I think my St.Paul’s short answers were great, or it’s just me not being able to write a proper essay. Hotchkiss and lawrenceville essay(SAO) were OK but I didn’t spend to much time on it. I procrastinated on my most important essays ironically because I wanted to perfect them, which is probably why I got waitlisted in those. One of my Exeter essays were about how my love for learning the Chinese language had extended on getting to know the Chinese community and just people in general and the other one was about how I overcame bullying in a sophisticated sentence. I think my first essay was what waitlisted me because I sent the same one for choate and got waitlisted as well. My Andover essay was a ramble of self-deprecation; I talked about how I was a kid who liked playing sports who was discouraged to play sports as I grew up, but after coming to junior boarding school, I stepped out of my comfort zone and played hockey in a supportive environment.
• Math Rec: 10/10 apparently she said she wrote a spectacular one to my advisor, which I found interesting because I thought she hated me
• English Rec: 8/10 he is a nice person so he would have written a good one but not on a personal level
• Personal/Extracurricular Rec: 10/10 my advisor is one of the people who love me the most. She knows me on a personal level despite spending time with me for only a year or so and embraces my peculiarities, to say.
• Principal/Counselor Rec: 8/10 I showed a lot of flaws in front of him, and also, this is his first year doing admissions after a former skilled one left. But he was my band director last year, and I tried to sub for every single thing he offered me in other bands despite him putting me in intermediate instead of advanced band last year.
Third teacher: 6/10 I chose my biology teacher, which I had no choice as I expressed my interest in biology. She is a first year teacher at our school. I think while she is very educated, she is not experienced enough as a teacher yet(early 20s), which makes her lectures rather boring. I did not pay attention in her class, and while I get decent grades, I don’t think she knows me that well.
• Sports (if any): soccer, hockey, softball 2 years in school’s jv team. Terrible
• Instruments (if any): Drums(2 years in school; a year in intermediate band and this year in advanced and jazz band) piano(9 years but barely remember anything) flute(similar with piano)
• Other ECs (if any): Science internship - my dad is a professor at a university in Korea, so I got to meet several people and did internships for their experiments. I was co-authored in one of the researches. I’m not sure if it helped though. Also I did a lot of club activities including coding club, math club, tinker club, robotics club, etc. Not an active member though. I take art as a main course as a member of advanced studio art for elected 9th graders despite having no interest in 2d art.
• Hook: Nope
Location/Person:
• State or Country: MA
• Current School Type: junior boarding school
• Ethnicity: Asian
• Gender: F
• Grade Applying For: 10
• Age: 16(repeated a year)
• Financial Aid/Full Pay: FP
Strengths:
interviews, being myself at all times, decent grades, and well rounded in academics and arts
Weaknesses:
Bad Essays(rushed through), bad quantitative, made A LOT of mistakes during Exeter’s application process(sent several thank you notes thinking that they didn’t receive it because they didn’t reply, sent the wrong PDF file for my essay, sent it late, also crappy, sent my resume extracurricular activities too late) taking ESL as an international student during 8th grade. Also, I had a few Cs from math and science in my public school in 7th grade, which was included in the transcript; trust me, it’s much more competitive there than here
Why do you think you were accepted/rejected/waitlisted?
I am actually not sure. Our school is through 9th grade so all of my friends are applying out; yesterday, I have seen many of my friends who I thought were qualified for the schools much more than I were but did not get into any of their top choices. I think being myself was definitely one, and also showing my desire to learn and hone myself to be better was another. I was the one interested in studying abroad, and I was the one who tried my butt hard to become the ideal applicant. I’ve seen many of my friends who are just extremely ready from countless acceptances due to all those conselings and cram schools and contest preparations that packaged their strengths. I was none of that. I think my realistic accomplishments that are clearly from my own effort was what made myself as an applicant desirable for the schools.
I think I was waitlisted due to all the weaknesses i have listed.
General Comments: while it is sad I didn’t get into Exeter, a school I have been indulging myself in for more than 4 years, I did get into its rival school, which means I am up for a revenge and am going to be working my butt hard to tell Exeter how it made a mistake not allowing me in! Hahaha