a question about grammar in a CR passage

<p>Look at the bold portion in the passage:</p>

<p>In this excerpt from a British novel published in 1938, a woman describes staying with her employer at a fashionable hotel in the resort city of Monte Carlo.
I wonder what my life would be to-
day, if Mrs. Van Hopper had not been a
snob.
Line Funny to think that the course of
5 my existence hung like a thread upon that
quality of hers. Her curiosity was a
disease, almost a mania. At first I had
been shocked, wretchedly embarrassed
when I watched people laugh behind her
10 back, leave a room hurriedly upon her
entrance, or even vanish behind a Service
door on the corridor upstairs. For many
years now she had come to the hotel Cote
d’Azur, and, apart from bridge, her one
15 pastime, which was notorious by now in
Monte Carlo, was to claim visitors of
distinction as her friends had she but seen
them once at the other end of the post-
office. Somehow she would manage to
20 introduce herself, and before her victim
had scented danger she had proffered an
invitation to her suite. Her method of
attack was so downright and sudden that
there was seldom opportunity to escape.
25 At the Cote d’Azur she staked a claim
upon a certain sofa in the lounge, midway
between the reception hall and the
passage to the restaurant, and she would
have her coffee there after luncheon and
30 dinner, and all who came and went must
pass her by. Sometimes she would
employ me as a bait to draw her prey,
and, hating my errand, I would be sent
across the lounge with a verbal message,
35 the loan of a book or paper, the address
of some shop or other, the sudden
discovery of a mutual friend. It seemed
as though notables must be fed to her,
and though titles 1 were preferred by her,
40 any face once seen in a social paper
served as well. Names scattered in a
gossip column, authors, artists, actors and
their kind, even the mediocre ones, as
long as she had learnt of them in print.
45 I can see her as though it were but
yesterday, on that unforgettable
afternoon—never mind how many years
ago—when she sat on her favourite sofa in
the lounge, debating her method of
50 attack. I could tell by her abrupt manner,
and the way she tapped her lorgnette 2
against her teeth, that she was questing
possibilities. I knew, too, when she had
missed the sweet and rushed through
55 dessert, and she had wished to finish
luncheon before the new arrival and so
install herself where he must pass.
Suddenly she turned to me, her small
eyes alight.
60 “Go upstairs quickly and find that
letter from my nephew. You remember,
the one written on his honeymoon, with
the snapshot. Bring it down right away.”
I saw then that her plans were
65 formed, and the nephew was to be the
means of introduction. Not for the first
time I resented the part that I must play
in her schemes. **Like a juggler’s assistant
I produced the props, then silent and
70 attentive I waited on my cue. **This new-
comer would not welcome intrusion, I felt
certain of that. In the little I had learnt of
him at luncheon, a smattering of hearsay
garnered by her ten months ago from the
75 daily papers and stored in her memory for
future use, I could imagine, in spite of my
youth and inexperience of the world, that
he would resent this sudden bursting in
upon his solitude. Why he should have
80 chosen to come to the Cote d’Azur at
Monte Carlo was not our concern, his
problems were his own, and anyone but
Mrs. Van Hopper would have understood.
Tact was a quality unknown to her,
85 discretion too, and because gossip was
the breath of life to her this stranger must
be served for her dissection.</p>

<p>1 “Titles” here refers to members of the European nobility.</p>

<p>2 Eyeglasses on the end of a short handle.</p>

<p>Like a juggler’s assistant I produced the props, then silent and attentive I waited on my cue. </p>

<p>"silent and attentive" should be "silently and attentively", right ? I just want to make sure.
CB test everyone grammar in Writing, but MANY times I encounter errors in CR Passage, many of which are punctuation ????</p>

<p>No, "silent and attentive" is an appropriate alternative grammatical structure in this context. "silently and attentively" is also correct, but the original is not incorrect. You have to remember that grammatical rules can be broken and that there are many exceptions in real writing. I don't think I've ever seen any errors in the CR passages, so if you are finding them, they are probably just structures you haven't seen before - but I doubt they are incorrect. But if you aren't sure, maybe you can post some other examples here and others can judge for you.</p>

<p>In the Blue Book of official college board tests, I do not think there are any errors in any of the CR passages.</p>

<p>I will try to remember where else I saw errors :D
But can you tell me why "silent and attentive" is correct ? Just curious :D</p>

<p>Will CB test this on Writing section ? What is the correct rule ?</p>

<p>To answer your question simply, it's a grammatical structure that may not be technically correct, but that is accepted as correct. In other words, it's the kind of thing you might think is wrong unless you are a native English speaker :( I suspect that the rest of the 'errors' you found in CR passages are also just special cases. The CR passages usually come from published famous books, journal and magazine articles, biographies, published papers, etc. They have been thoroughly edited by professionals before publication. They are not written by CollegeBoard. So, there is almost no chance that you will find an error in a CR passage...</p>

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Like a juggler’s assistant I produced the props, then silent and
attentive I waited on my cue.

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<p>I don't really know how to explain why this is correct, although I'm sure it is. However, think of it as </p>

<p>"Like a juggler's assisntant, I produced the props, then (I was) silent and attentive (while) I waited on my cue". If you add in those words in ()s, the sentence should make sense. In conversational English, you can basically remove those extra words and preserve the meaning and the correctness of the sentence.</p>

<p>Don't worry too much about this specific example, because you're probably not going to see it again on the SAT. The best thing you can do is to remember each of these "exceptions" as you read them. They're sort of like idioms, but they're like "grammatical idioms" - special grammatical structures that are correct even though they seem like errors.</p>

<p>The general principles that amb3r provided are really valuable here.</p>

<p>The technical explanation, if you are still curious, is that the adjectives "silent" and "attentive" describe the pronoun "I." Since they describe a pronoun, not a verb, they should be adjectives. This sentence means that the speaker was silent and attentive, not that she waited silently and attentively (although in this case there's basically no difference in the meaning of the two versions). But grammatically, the rule or pattern is the same as in the following example:</p>

<p>"The boy climbed out of the pool. Then, tired and wet, he walked to the showers."</p>

<p>Why don't we write "tiredly" and "wetly"? Because these words are intended to describe the boy ("he") not the action ("walked"). In the passage from the test (which, incidentally, comes from the <em>awesome</em> novel <em>Rebecca</em>), the issue is more confusing because the author didn't use commas to separate the phrase "silent and attentive" from the rest of the sentence.</p>

<p>But, as amb3r already mentioned, this issue is highly unlikely to be tested on the SAT W. Your best bet is to learn all of the standard grammar rules cold, maybe study some common verb/preposition pairs (which you can find in any decent guide), and then relax. Idioms are usually not worth more than 20-30 points anyway.</p>

<p>Thanks amb3r</p>

<p>Thanks lotf692</p>

<p>Oh, a quick note to both of you. Here are two excellent sources for the real rules of English usage:</p>

<p>*Practical English Usage (ISBN 0194420981; 5 stars/30 reviews at Amazon)</p>

<p>*Collins COBUILD Advanced Learner's Dictionary (0007210124; also 5 stars) : your one-stop shop for questions about the correct use of prepositions</p>

<p>amb3r, if you are going to teach the Writing section to non-native speakers, these book may quickly become your best friends. </p>

<p>kindhearted, these books will answer a lot of your questions for you.</p>