acknowledging privilege in the diversity essay?! please help

You said yourself that you go to the fourth rated girl’s school in the united states. Why are you asking us, a bunch of random and probably unqualified people on CC, what to write about when it’s very likely that your college counselor/other officials at your school have way more relevant experience, and knowledge?

Seriously, if you go to a good school and your guidance counselor thinks a particular topic is a bad idea, I’d listen to them.