Admissions Essays

Hi! Would anyone be willing to read some admissions essays for me? I will PM you if so. Also, would people here suggest essayforum.com for some extra advice on essays or is it risky?
Thanks!

I suggest not doing this simply because you never know who you are sharing with. They could just copy it and claim it as their own, or they might not know what they are talking about. Just my opinion though.

http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/

You can go to the link above and post a thread there. Be wary of who you send it to. Make sure that they have at least some post count and look at their posting history to ensure that they are not a high school senior.